Gabe was a fourth grader who was blogging about how he believed that the Lock Ness Monster was still alive. He said that there was enough evidence to support his theory. I responded back by telling him I thought that there was enough evidence to support that there was a Lock Ness Monster one time or another somewhere in the world. He responded back by stating the Lock Ness Monster is still alive today. I thought his post was pretty interesting.
Yasmine
Yasmine was a writing about her hard swim practice that she went to. She gave a lot of detail about the different things the coach made her do during practice to make her technique better. I responded back to Yasmine by telling her that I liked how much detail she put into her post, it really made me feel that I could see her practice. I told her that I could remember similar practices when I was in school for my running practices. She responded back to me by stating that one day she hope to be in the Olympics for swimming. I think that is a great goal that she has set for herself.
Paris
Paris is a five year student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. She was writing about her walk through the brush with her father. While she was on her walk they spotted a dead rat and she got sick. She did get medicine though and started to feel much better. I responded back to her by writing that I thought it was great that her and her dad went on brush walks together. I stated that I as well would have gotten sick if I were to see a dead rat. I wrote that I was glad that she got to feeling better though, and wished her a better brush walk next time.
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